Friday, September 21, 2007

speaking of fish

the man tried to make a brick wall out of fish
it would've been easier to use bricks
or to make a fish wall out of his fish
but it would take a very dry mortar to keep the fish in place
most likely the fish would die
i suppose he could put in a water feature
flowing water down the wall
and patiently the man could
feed each fish by hand
possibly corn from a can
or the man could give worms to the fish
but i can't think that he would
it would take a lot of worms to feed a wall
big enough to cast a shadow over his hammock

this was my open writing for tonight


Christina said...

dig it. Very nice, sir Joe.

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